|Reviews for Roaming Pain|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
I like it. Good to see that you have posted a new poem.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
*Chuckles to himself* I like it! Well Put, but with a good, serious point at the end. I think perhaps you should say "With bags" rather than "With the bags" - you should only use 'the' if you've mentioned the bags before, but of course you may have intentionally done that.