Reviews for Lie in Wait
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
really good!
Doc Blood chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Do you "lie" as you wait? This is a real question from someone nearly five times your age who is questioning how much of what we tell ourselves is "true." Good poem with a real question embedded in it.

Peace, Doc
Lounalune chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I like the feeling of this poem. This question we have sometimes. Is there anything I can do to control my life, or is it just coming to me?
Honor Bound chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
good job, though the rhyme seems perhaps to simplistic. contemplate, plate? then again, maybe not. thanks for the heads up, fixed it
Tad Zendol chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Thank you for the review Hate. Is there anything else that I can call you? XD

I like the repetition of the opening and closing lines in this poem, but the rhyming seems somewhat strained.
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
it's a good poem and a good writing scheme, i'll give you that. i have to ask though- how is it too late, if you've just been lying and waiting?
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Hopeless, its too late? I wish it was never too late. Bold writing! Write on, my friend.
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Very good D! I like this, the way it rhymes and all. It is very deep in meaning. To be able to write with meaning and make it rhyme takes real talent in my opinion.
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Sad... write on!

braindead1345 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
abd what would you fate be?
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Nice Poem! I liked it! Great Job!