Reviews for Oh Great, Just Typical |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like it alot please keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start :) update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most excellent! I like Risse's name, her way of thinking, and her absolute need to stay in routine. She sounds wicked cool! Not sure about Royce and the boys, you'll have to write more so I can form an opinion ;) Fantastic, please continue with this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it :]] update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, nice. ~K |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao! We got warned about the whole "black belt" and the change of perspective really worked, while introducing more charcters. Can't really tell much about the story as a whole but I intend to stay with it because it was a "hooky" story and I want to read MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the start. very interesting. Though, why don't you want to receive anonymous reviews? Just a question. If you do want to receive some, you should go to your settings in your user and uncheck that anonymous box thingy. hehehe sorry if that was confusing. you'll understand when you see it. :) hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "when he went flying over her shoulder" wow nice cliffie there... love the name Risse! Haha I really like how this is turning out, I wonder what's gonna happen to Royce? Great 1st chapter! (and the name Royce kinda reminds me of Rolls-Royce, haha...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dimensionally extravagant Keep writing Alan |