|Reviews for I Realized|
| Reader chapter 12 . 8/15/2010
I feel awful for twins who gets into relationships like this. It just plain sucks, especially being used as rebound and all. Though I know Kit really isn't using Matt as rebound, it's kind of hard to believe that.
Nice story by the way. Just a pit fast paced in several areas.
| ConnorCookie chapter 12 . 6/13/2010
| Supervillain chapter 12 . 9/22/2008
oh I thought this was very cute x)
| acousticbruises chapter 12 . 8/5/2008
This story got a lot better as it went on and I'm happy I stuck with it. Kit was my favorite character, a little dense but still a cute little thing. Your writing improved as time went on and I think if you let the story sit another few months, then go back and edit it through, it'd be ten times better than it already is.
| acousticbruises chapter 11 . 8/5/2008
Psh you made it too easy for them. I'm not quite sure why you shadowed towards the idea of incestuos feelings, it wasn't quite needed for the story.
| acousticbruises chapter 10 . 8/5/2008
Hm repairing that sort of sibiling rift isn't going to be very easy. Poor Kit, such an idealist!
| acousticbruises chapter 9 . 8/5/2008
I'm really not quite sure the function of this chapter, but it was very well written. From the first chapter you can deffinatlly see the improvement in your work.
| acousticbruises chapter 8 . 8/5/2008
I love how slightly desnse Kit is, and how Matt calls himself the King of Verbal Combat.
| acousticbruises chapter 7 . 8/5/2008
"He's so cute. He should be illegal."
Best line ever tee-hee. I enjoyed this chapter, a little shot but well done.
| acousticbruises chapter 6 . 8/5/2008
Cue dramatic music. Poor Kit, saw that coming a million miles away, though. :(
| acousticbruises chapter 5 . 8/5/2008
C'est la vie best phrase ever. I use it all the time myself.
When I picture Jack I picture herpes crawling everywhere.
| acousticbruises chapter 4 . 8/5/2008
Drama-rama ah! Poor Kit, I want to snuggle him until the brothers fight to the death and then set him off with a nice boy. Tee-hee. Watch out for grammar/ topic jumping. :)
| acousticbruises chapter 3 . 8/5/2008
Yikes, that is a pretty harsh betrayl. Huggles to the poor boy.
As a note, you need to watch out for run-on-sentences as well as fragments, it can make things very tough to read.
| acousticbruises chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
I like how you begin their story at such a young age.
| acousticbruises chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Unless you are writting a play, it really is not a good idea to be writing a character/ characteristic list. Things like this should be incooperated into the story itself.