Reviews for Finding Elysium
noname52 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
I love this. Rhadis totally rocks!
Chi-chan chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
I like it! I can't wait for more personally. Rhadis is easily becoming my favorite character. But the title confused me a little bit...I thought it was Elysian not Elysium...oh well, it still has a nice ring to it. More please!
zephyrlight chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
ooh. 're right.. it IS entertaining!update!ima sugu!lol.. great job P
FoxyGrampa chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Cool. :33 Should be interesting~~ I think I already figured out the begining though. 8D But I won't spoil it for anyone.

The only critique I have is to be less cryptic with action sequences; I didn't really know what Rhadis was doing in some paragraphs. Try to make it more specific, yeah? ;D

Looking forward to the next update. o: