Reviews for On The Pitch
It's 2019 chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
erm... what happened to the rest?..
HeyAyashe chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Aw, went back to reread this great story and was shocked that it was getting reworked! Haha! Oh well, good luck with the writing! :)
xSometimesx chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I stumbled across this in my favorites again, and really would love to read a new version! Any change of an update? :)
hayleym chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Please update soon!
Ms.Romantic chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
cant wait
k chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
"But as much as the world likes to mock Americans for their ignorance of the beautiful game, football just isn't the correct term for it in English. Soccer is right."

"The world comes from 19th-century British slang for “Association Rules” football, a kicking and dribbling game that was distinct from “Rugby rules” football back when both versions were played by British schoolboys. The lads who preferred the rougher game popular in schools like Rugby and Eton seceded from Britain’s fledgling Football Association in 1871 to write their own rules, and soon players were calling the two sorts of football “rugger” and “soccer.”

-from spiegel, a german mag

great story, just thought you should know!
Gimstan chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
GAHH! I just fancied re-reading this story, finish the first chapter and find the rest of it missing!I don't know weather to be annoyed or excited its been redone... Please update soon!
a case of me chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Gah, where are the new chapters? Everytime I watch a game I think of this story- plus Liverpool played today and Torres is basically Salvador. Please end my agony, I'm begging you!

Dramatic, yes? Wow, I miss this story.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Varsiva chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Another football story, yay! Seriously, football stories on Fictionpress has now gotten me obsessed with football whereas I didn't care at all before. I can't wait to read more of your story. Please update soon :).
QuebecNights chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
hey! i love this new version. i was interested in the topic so i started reading the old version, but this one is better haha. i love watching euro 08 and im guessing tristan will go all the way as fernando torres did in the final. lol i hope so, i still have a bias against gareth from the old version. my suggestion is not to make gareth as much of a jerk by cheating on kiara because then shes kinda on the rebound...idk, but i'd prefer her to be stuck somewhere with tristan and theyre forced to talk or whatever and then realize their feelings. ok, ill stop blabbing. bu great stot idea, keep the updates coming :)
awaiting.rain chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
so far, so good.

however, there are a bunch of grammar mistakes you should fix.
Northern One chapter 1 . 7/1/2008

Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. The only thing I didn't like was England; they didn't qualify for Euro 2008! LOL, I'm nitpicking, so just ignore that XD.

Love it.

Keep it up!
Spai chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
hey! first time reading this story, i like how you have started it! and why you hating on la liga. lol. by the way i just wanted to say that "Elle" picture doesnt work. Keep updating!

p.s. i was dancing and screaming like crazy when spain WON EURO 2008! woot woot!
pixxidust chapter 13 . 6/30/2008
i definitely think you should keep up with this story :) it's too great to give up on, even if you think it needs a major edit. so yes, i will continue to read :)
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