| Reviews for On The Pitch |
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   Rock My Socks chapter 13 . 6/26/2008 I think you should continue this; I just read all 12 chapters in one sitting, and while I agree that it could use a teeny tiny bit of work (what writing can't?), I definitely think you should keep going. |
| gulistala chapter 13 . 6/25/2008 I dunno why you think there's something wrong with this, but hey if that's what you feel. You are the writer. D gulistanlik |
| gulistala chapter 12 . 6/25/2008 I think Marc does have a bit of a thing for Kiara seeing as he's the one that kept getting pissed everytime there was PDA between Tristan and Kiara. Well, can't wait till the actual next chappie! gulistanlik |
| JZK chapter 13 . 6/25/2008 I really love this story and the fact that its enlgish - i mean real english not american english - helps alot i really wan tot see what ahppens next and i hope you get some ideas for it buena suerte |
| IsabellaLove chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 I love this story seriously its one of the best ones i have read D |
| HeyAyashe chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 Of course we want you to keep writing or editing or whatevahh! Just do what you have to do, girlie! We'll wait |
| The Mad Hatter chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 hey I like your story " On the Picth" and if you ever finish it or update then i will totally continue reading it. |
| arouralai chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 please keep working on this story! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 12 . 6/23/2008 i love the story! i cant wait for more! i hope you update soon! -ifly*hugs* |
| books4me chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 Whatever you do, DO NOT SCRAP THIS STORY! *softer, less scary voice* Please... Ahem, anyway, I really loved this story, so I like the idea that you will be editing it, although I'm mostly looking forward to finding out what happens next! *Boosk4mE* |
| awaiting.rain chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 well, i'm glad you're not abandoning this story, b/c it's such a great one. good luck with the rewrite. and if you need any help, i'd be glad to help. and i'm sure there are others who are willing to help too. |
| Xenn chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 DO NOT STOP WRITING Please? Your story is wonderful, intriguing, and starring my all-time idol. This story is full of twists, yet not retardedly complicated. How you spin characters is a mystery to me, only a far off dream. Please keep writing. Xenn |
| Aeron chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 hey...I loved all the drama of your story and it was an intresting read. If you still want help, I can offer you my services...I'm hoping to go into editing and this should give me some good practice...let me know...and don't be so hard on yourself it happens to the best of us. xx. A |
| slilver chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 I love this story please keep writing it! :) |
| madda8lynn chapter 13 . 6/23/2008 Omg please finish or rewrite because it such a great story.! you have no idea how excited i got when i saw that there was an update! the funny thing is i was talking about this tory today with my friends about how hot the soccer players you picked are and i come home and see this |