Reviews for On The Pitch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on finishing school! I just found ur story today and finished reading it. Love it! Hopefully you'll get around to updating it soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey if ur really in need of editors i'm willing to help out i love editing lol. n yeah i'm still one of your readers :] |
![]() ![]() I'd love to read a re-write of this fic. Honestly I don't remember many of the details of the story but I remember really enjoying it. Best of luck with whatever you decide to do and congratulations with finishing school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *knocks back* I'm still here! If you need help with anything, editing or ideas, I'm here! PM me or send me an email ] keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() heck yes edit edit edit, go for it, this story rocked, and it still does ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez, I was wondering where you disappeared to. I'm still a reader, and I'm pretty pumped about the rewrite...so don't take 11 months to do it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, love this story. i'm completely willing to read the edited version and to help you out if you need anything. Just pm me or email me. :D good luck! can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm still a reader! don't worry coz i do things like this all the time, start stories and kinda fizzle out. i hope you do carry on with the story and rewrite etc coz i enjoy this story and would love to see it continue. xNx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story. Please update soon! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I discovered this at the SKoW awards and thought I'd give it a read. I'm not a huge soccer fan, but I like any sports-related stories, and this one is pretty good. I don't like how you haven't updated in a long time, though, so hopefully you will soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARGH! Update ASAP, because I absolutely LOVE this. It's weird, though, because I'm really not a big fan of soccer, but for some reason this story makes me want to watch it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Your story "On The Pitch" is really freakin good, my friend! ] You kno usually i dont come along soccer[[or football]] stories alott or at least ones as good as urs, but you've done a fantasmic job with it, so congradulations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more por favor? ] It's been so long! |
![]() ![]() She's a little young... but great story, UPDATE please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to 13 being up next week? It's been five months, sweetheart! This is a wonderful story. The characters are vibrant and funny, and having football be so central to the plot is refreshing. I'm looking forward to whenever you can update! I really hope you don't abandon this. It's too good to let die. |