Reviews for On The Pitch |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() "next chapter should be up next week." I miss Tristan! haha, you're leaving me hanging here. I want the fluff! You've disappeared for about 4 months, is everything okay? Hope so... Happy Holidays :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. I love the MU! Keeo writting girl, I want to know what happens next! Love Iz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Enjoying the chemistry between Kiara and Tris. Keep up the great work, Mark in Time |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love soccer (football), and i wish you would update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygosh, I love this! Continue, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() she's eighteen and has already lived with a guy for a year and is sharing an hotel room with her one month boyfriend? you must do things quick over there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i truely adore this story... and i hope that everything is ok with Tristan... please continue this story soon, i can't wait for the next chapter cheers Michelle |
![]() ![]() please hurry up and update! lol! :D and i hope there will be a chapter in which gareth gets his bloody ass kicked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't tristan play for another team? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I love Tristan! Two years? That is so cute! This chapter was real fluffy, and even though it was a filler i loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely fabulous! I love it! Continue REALLY soon. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, this was heaps better! :D good job. tristan wont catch marc and kiara right? or if he does, he wont get jealous will he? cuz that's just stupid |