Reviews for Betrayal
Sunburst Angel chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
OMG amazing. So subtle at the beginning with slight shadows of fantasy and then you barely even notice the change until the end where she / you are so prepared to fight, but while yet still retaining your emotions and beliefs. And while the water was beginning to consume you and you fought futilely, I really felt something there as I kept questioning why does it always have to be this way? So unique, but I still connect to this turmoil. I was teary-eyed - not crying - from your enrapturing descriptions and poetic/narrative style. Never stop writing. :)
Damaged chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
0_0 This is definitely going on my favorite's list. I have never related so whole-heartedly to a poem as strong as I relate to this one. I felt the betrayal, I saw the girl from the past, and I felt the hesitation before driving the dagger in ...

This is such a BEAUTIFUL poem. If I were a publisher, you'd definitely have a contract ... wow ...

~Damaged~