|Reviews for reality|
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
I feel it; the poem is amazinf, just beautiful.
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
'but in dreams you pick me up'...ah i loved that verse. nice work.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
sad, and i love how the last stanza is almost winding and so twisted. nice work.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
this is so sad. and i can relate : (...
| Prevaricate chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
"yet in reality, you (obviously) let me bleed."
that line is so striking. the parentheticals are lovely.
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
oh i feel that sister!