Reviews for Drunk as a Fart
Elfin Knight chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Ouch. The dude who reviewed first was kind mean! The title is humorous, yes, but I agree that the poem lacks some..substance. But then, that could be because being drunk lacks a certain dignitiy and meaning. I know that when I'm completely sloshed I don't do much but reel around like a fool...so, in a way, the poem is both accurate and effective in its repetitive delivery. However, it feels a little empty of emotion and leaves much to be desired. It's not a bad poem, honestly, but it could definately be better. I'm sure you're an excellent writer-please don't think of stopping because of a few lousy reviews! Best of luck! Hehe.
heroin zombie chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
There's not much here. The comedy of the title loses whatever quality you thought it had through its repetition, and everything else between it is pretty boring. It's just a limp, dull poem about a subject that could possibly be the basis for an otherwise decent poem.