Great story, its going in my favourites.

I'm going to second the call for some more descriptions.

But aside from that and one or two spelling mistakes, I have no complaints.

The plot sounds good.

The style has me hooked.

The digression was excellent.

And the jokes were great.

When can we expect more?

I will beg for chapters.

Yay! The next part! Well, this was even more interesting, because it gave some sort of direction to the monsters-a purpose, you know? Getting to see a bit more what Shada and Urguld are like...I'm a Shada fan, I have to say. Nothing greater than a clever monster! I'm such a pro-monster person, you know. Muahah!

I'm very much looking forward to meeting this Librarian character. He sounds incredibly interesting! Can't wait for the next update, friend!

I enjoyed this, I really did, it's very refreshing and quirky. Your sense of humor is very nice too. A bit more description would be nice though, especially when it comes to the unique appearances of your monsters and your settings.

I'll be looking forward to more.

~Rain Gray

Yay! Another chapter! I liked the random digression, by the way. I am a fan of random digressions. Also your style of writing is extremely amusing...haha. It's very fun to read. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, and since it is really an extension of this chapter, I will wait until then to leave a more substatial review.

Yay! You're continuing! I'm glad that there's a second part to this chapter. I figured that you would write more about them in the next chapter, and the humorous description of Mortimer reminded me of Terry Pratchett a little bit. Very pleasing. :) I really do love your writing style; I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Fantastic! Oh, please do write more of this. I'd love to read it. I'll check back constantly for updates...haha! I love the fact that on top of silver and garlic (known monster-killers, you know?) soapy water is listed...oh man. It's just brilliant. You couldn't have done a better job. My only complaint is that you didn't poste enough to sate my hunger! Hunger for good fiction! Yum yum.

Okay..right. Anyway. Post more, I'll keep R&R'ing.

That was wonderful! Urguld's so comical, I love the character of Shada. I crave more!