Reviews for belonging
stained blue chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
"Holy Graden snake"

that's nice, like a different way of saying it.
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
How is /everything/ you write so goreous?

It's amazing. really.

How do you do it? I'm honestly in love with your work.
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
i adore the last 3 lines. "Holy Garden snake" has such a ring to it.
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
You never cease to amaze me. I loved it bunches, you have a wonderful way with words.
dirty windows chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I love this. It's visual and bitter and simply beautiful.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
painful, inteersting too with that last image, lovely job
eldrin chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Just love the conclusion.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Not much to say on this one, a bit short I guess but I suppose it fits with the whole "oneword: belonging" thing. We both know you can do better, but as always... this was a enjoyable read. See you on your next update, noelle-san. - ADD-san
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
Wow, your poetry is so amazing. *Jealous* I love the format, the words, everything, nicely done.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
powerful and beautifully written
castelgard chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
nice.. absolutely loved it!
finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
she said to me:"can i say 'i love you' enough?"

i replied:"you just can't"and"this isn't belonging"

because that deserved an encore, period. beautiful. suffocating, intoxicating.


account not in use chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
ha. love.
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Wow, something that short and blunt could not have been so good! Nice work.
Sythiro chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Uh! I don't know what to say, except for that you confused me! Anyways it is good! Keep it up!Sythiro
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