Reviews for Poison
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
mezzie chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
the first line of each verse is particularly good, i especially like "take me everywhere you've lost yourself to". and "your words are haunting if only true" - good good lines : )

Samana chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
this is great, normally when a poem has this standard rhyme skyme it will sound choppy and thin when read, but yours flows gracfully, i love it, keep writing, peace