Reviews for Dancing in the Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed reading this. I hope one day you come back to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naww...so sad :( GREAT STORY! xx Ali |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya, This is Cisca Ironflame but I'm on my newer account (I don't write on the Cisca account anymore). Anyway, I saw you had updated since last time! When I looked on my old account I saw that this was updated, so I reread the chapters (since its been a while since I've read it) and read this one. I must say I absolutely love this story and I sincerely hope you'll continue this story because I am interested in finding out what will happen. Your characters are captivating especially Ryleigh and Raiken. I want to see what will happen to them! Well I hope you update sometime soon. ~Topaz36 (formerly known as Cisca) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic x] I love it all. update soon...please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. I think that the story has too much dialogues instead of narration but overall, you write a good story. Awesome twists in the story. They come unexpected. :D Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely fabulous. It's different, and I love it. I hope Raiken gets his memory back soon! Hmm can't wait to see what happens next! I'll be waiting... :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gawd! why is she gving up on him..ugh stupid stupid stupid girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this story is simply amazing! It's a bit dark for my ussual taste but it was way to good to stop reading. I hope to see you update adn finnish this story, it's a rarity to find a story that comes from pure talent. It will be such a waste if it isn't finnished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter, it does explain some things. I am glad Ryleigh found some solace in Amy. Does Ryleigh have feelings for Raiken, or is this more of a friend-love? I am THINKING that it is more of a friend-love and she has feelings for Speed instead. Does Raiken have a closed head injury, or is this temporary? i have heard of both temporary amnesia AND a closed head injury, but typically closed head injuries only affect your short term memory. So I'd guess Raiken would wake up thinking Ryleigh was his best friend... I look forward to your next update for sure ). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I'm glad to see you're back! For what you claimed to be a filler, I thought it was really well done. I really enjoyed this chapter and I honestly can not wait for the next one and see what unfolds next. You are a good writer and I am glad I saw this story months ago. ~Cisca Ironflame |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! i love this story so far please update i cant wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this please update soon |
![]() ![]() omg! UPDATE SON! lol aww yes i was on a volleyball team too and it just ended.. that sucks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg u can't end this like this pls update it faster pls pls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh cliffhanger! wow great chapter. _ |