Reviews for Dancing in the Rain
atreyu love chapter 7 . 8/7/2006
they called her dad the lucky seven killer? O_O her dad is psycho. yepyep. i like your writing though :D
atreyu love chapter 6 . 8/7/2006
I LOVE BILLY TALENT! :D ESPECIALLY RED FLAG lol, excellent taste in music :)
atreyu love chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
he didnt notice her wrist? ARGH hes kinda oblivious .. and alittle cowardly. but i like the story anyways
atreyu love chapter 4 . 8/7/2006
eh.. she just told him she was raped. and he didnt say anything about it... did he hear her? hmm.. just wondering.
ellinikolouloudi chapter 9 . 8/7/2006
this story is coming out great so far. you've captured all the characters' emotions perfectly. ~Elli
Cisca Ironflame chapter 9 . 8/6/2006
Well you made it to 30 reviews before your next chappie. Congrats, BTW.

Now you got me hooked! How confusing situation and how everything unfolded this way. NICE!

I really hope you're quick when it comes to updating. I really am seriously liking this.
Cisca Ironflame chapter 8 . 8/6/2006
Good, good. The only thing I noticed was when you had the flashback you switched from first person POV and then to third and then to first again. Thats it. :)

Now onto the last chapter that you have for now. I hope its good! Lol
Cisca Ironflame chapter 7 . 8/6/2006
I really like this one. Its a little ironic, but irony is good.

Now I really can't wait to read the next chapter. This story really pulls you in.
Cisca Ironflame chapter 6 . 8/6/2006
I like how Talon is a funny character. Even though Speed isn't as bad as we thought he was, I still want Raiken and her to be together at the end.

What will happen? *Starts to read the actual chapter 6*
hellokittygirl chapter 9 . 8/6/2006
Ouch. Very good though. ]

Update soon!

hellokittygirl chapter 4 . 8/6/2006
I really like this story, but I just don't like how when they were in the park, she forgives him so easily. She's all of a sudden happy that he's there for her. And when she tells him that Speed raped her, he doesn't say anything about him. He just talks about Stephanie. I just found that a bit ... odd. Other than that, I really like it. ]

dyingofluv chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
Erm...NO! NO MORE CHAPTER?ah! *falls off cliff*
lameosaur chapter 9 . 8/5/2006
i change my mind...this is my favorite chapter..cause it brings back alot of memories for me...

but anyway great chapter:) update soon!
Cisca Ironflame chapter 5 . 8/5/2006
Ahh... I like the ending of this chapter. I feel sorry for both of them. Ryleigh because of, well everything, and Raiken because he was only seven and it would be difficult to muster courage and face an adult.

The question that is going through my mind is, where will there go from here? There is a lot of tension and that makes good for a story.

Good job! And here I go again... *starts to read chapter 6*
Cisca Ironflame chapter 4 . 8/5/2006
I am also impressed with this chapter and how you tied the characters together. Ha! Stephanie is caught (she's a loser, lol).

I think Raiken was moving a little too fast for Ryleigh's liking but thats my opinion.

Good, good! I will continue reading. )
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