Reviews for Dancing in the Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The only main thing I noticed was the part when Talon was introducing Speed to Ryleigh. You said "Talon this is Speed. Speed this is Talon" when I think you meant "Ryleigh this is Speed. Speed this is Ryleigh." Thats about it. Poor Ryleigh. It's bad enough that her father abused her but now pratically everyone else is. I like where this story is headed. I hope Raiken will realize Stephanie is not the right girl for him. I will continue to read now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How sad! I, myself, am against alcohal and other depressants and I am glad to see that Raiken was there. Stephanie, on the other hand, well... she's just plain mean and thats all there is to it. I saw a few grammar mistakes, but then again, my stories have their share of grammar mistakes :). Great so far and I can't to read chappie number two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like these type of stories about two teenagers who known each other since they were really young. So far I like how you made this scene look cute and not too adult like. Good Job! Now onto the next chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy reading this story. This last chapter was a funny chapter w/ the pants and all lol. And I really wanna know what happens when and if Ryleigh explains about Speed. update soon:) |
![]() ![]() I love this story! I'm not really sure what else to say... |
![]() ![]() ![]() :/ Aw, I like Speed better than Raiken, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Speed now, in the beginning i didn't, of course, but where is Raiken (sp?)? I thought he was with Ryleight? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ryleigh and Speed! Good call! I think they'll be great together, and I like the scene with her friends, they sound like people I'd get along with. Very amusing. This chapter was a breath of fresh air. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha this one was funny :)update plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, Speed & Ryleigh together. Never expected that to happen |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOAH! i never expected that to happen. WOW! but anyway...awesome once again...update soon and BMD got another review :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy this story very much. There's a lot of sadness but its still great. The only thing I notice sometimes are typos or wrong usages of words like you're when you were supposed to say your. But I hope u update soon! This story is in my favorites :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is so well written! And i'm dying to know Speed's reaction...and just..wow..please continue to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love your story, its freaking awsome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() post more! i like it already! |