Reviews for Sweethearts
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 24 . 5/21/2011
:( its over :'(

i love how parts of it is based on your own life and how you incorporated different story lines within the main one :D
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 20 . 5/21/2011
YAY! Topher and Paul made up :D :D :D :D

wow Topher really doesnt like drama does he :O

your sequels arent about the same ppl right?
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 12 . 5/21/2011
awww poor Topher :(

he just wants his little bro back ... :'(
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
hey is this a a love triangle btwn Paul, Emma, and Johnny?
Emma Danielle chapter 24 . 5/2/2010
Great story :D

I'm going on to read the one about steven :D
Emma Danielle chapter 20 . 5/2/2010
oh good. paul is finally not a hypocrite
Emma Danielle chapter 18 . 5/2/2010
josh is a good guy :D

and paul... hypocrite much? he needs to forgive him brother, unless there's more going on with him that we don't know
Emma Danielle chapter 6 . 5/2/2010
oh this is geting god :D
Emma Danielle chapter 4 . 5/2/2010
Okay, so I'm loving this story so far.

Its a little weird though...

cause my name is emma, and I have a friend named paul (granted we don't go to the same school) and and and my dad's name is dan. that's strange... okay I'm going to keep reading now.
RebVoDKaLover chapter 16 . 11/25/2009
To put it mildly, your story sucks.

Eric wasn't a Cullen is a lying famewhore with his own agendas of money and fame .

His book is utter trash.

Next time , please do some real,detailed research before slandering a dead person.


Thanx. Bye.
BalletManiac chapter 23 . 8/28/2007
OMG ! I LOVED your story ! i read it in one day lol :P anyway I just wanted to let you know this is one of the best stories I've read on this website! It actually has a plot ! I really enjoyed it and I think you should pursue your career in writting !

As for your questions these are my answers :

-Who was your favorite character?

Well I liked Emma because she has great comebacks :p

-What was your favorite part/chapter?

I like the part where Emma explains to Paul that she used to date Steven and that she was the first to know he was gay and that they later became best friends. I also liked the part where Emma tells paul about her childhood sweetheart :)

-Is there anything you think I should improve on in my writing?

I found your writting great and I really enjoyed it !

-Do I have any particular strengths?

I have to say I very much enjoyed the witty comebacks that Emma came up with. You also managed to connect the events together in your plot very smoothly :)

Goodluck in your writting and I'm off to read some of your other work :)

SecretWhispers chapter 24 . 7/21/2007
This story was just so sweet! You did a really awesome job with it.
Kimberli Kitten chapter 24 . 4/1/2007
Wow. I loved it. It was extremely well-written, and had a very cute storyline.
Kimberli Kitten chapter 6 . 3/31/2007
Here I was, saying i'd try a few chapters to see how it was, and what can I say. You have me hooked.
Imagined Insanity chapter 23 . 3/4/2007
oh, my god. I swear to god i started crying when i read the cafeteria scene. It's CUTE!
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