Reviews for Sweethearts
STAR GIRL chapter 21 . 11/3/2006
I LOVED IT. But I'm gonna miss Steven. Sob!

"...Get a grip."

“Mom, not that kind of grip…” Haha.

"I love you," Paul said. Aww!

"I felt like sleeping in," Paul shrugged. "Why?" You WHAT?

"Yes, ma'am," Paul said. Haha, that's ME!

Back off, sweetie, he's mine. LOL! I ADORED that!

“Want a Crunch bar?” Paul asked Emma as he peeled the wrapper off one himself.

“Paul!” shrieked Emma, punching his shoulder, “You just told me that you apologized to your brother, and now you want to know if I want a Crunch bar?” Haha, that was funny.

“Johnny…” Paul whined, “Can’t you just get over the fact that we stuck you in a room with a gay guy and get on with your life?” That's the best part. I swear.

“That’s a bad thing?” Paul asked. Aww, what a cutie.

“Why are we even friends?” Johnny asked him, “All we ever do anymore is fight. Ever since Emma showed up…” Johnny went from being utterly huggable to bitchslappable in two seconds.

I love the serious ending part too. It's so fun saying aloud all dramatic-like and exaggerating everything. It's almost like a soap opera. Bwaha.
x666poisongirl666x chapter 20 . 10/29/2006
i love your story. keep up the good work!
l i v i n gxw or d s chapter 20 . 10/26/2006
i just started reading this & i think its awesome. i lova all the little storylines but i wish paul & emma would get on with it & hook up. im a sucker 4 happy endings, fyi.
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 20 . 10/25/2006
Nice chapter! I loved it!
Tzotel431 chapter 20 . 10/23/2006
Oh no! STEVEN! he must return, I love him...

And there aren't anymore chapters...UPDATE!

This was a great chapter by the way...


Tzotel431 chapter 19 . 10/23/2006
The kiss was well written, classy. I liked this chapter! I can't believe that I had no emails about all these updates you did, I think you somehow found your wayoff my author alert list, not to fear! You are back on it now!

Great chapter!

Tzotel431 chapter 17 . 10/23/2006
So first, I apologize for the long wait on the review...I have had so much damn homework and I have a job, so that takes all my time...

Anyways, why didn't Paul tell her? AHH! He's right there! Why can't she see it!

RhythmOfMySoul chapter 19 . 10/21/2006
GREAT CHAPTER! I loved all of it! Your writing is amazing!

Everything was well written so don't worry about it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!
Abby Sequioa chapter 19 . 10/21/2006
I love it! I hope Emma realizes sometime that he is her Paul. this story is really good... waiting for the next chapter!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 18 . 10/21/2006
Aww. Such a nice chapter.

I loved the part with Paul! It was VERY well written!

Also, the end was AMAZINGLY well written. I loved it! Kudos to you!

(Sorry for the late review)
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 17 . 10/11/2006
Great chapter as always! I loved the conversation about Paul, it was really great.

When is Paul going to let Emma know that...he is Paul? Yeah, sounds wierd but you understand, so yeah.

Great chapter!
Abby Sequioa chapter 16 . 10/5/2006
ahh I love it! I totally didn't read this story in forever, and it's freaking. awesome. Paul and Steven are so amazing, and Johnny is the perfect messed up teenager. a lot of stories are about people with too perfect of lives, or about people who are so messed up it's not even belivable. you've created a perfect balance. I un-patiently wait for the next update!
Tzotel chapter 16 . 10/4/2006
Sorry It's been so long...I have so much homework and I am procrastinating on it right now...

ANyways, this was a very good chapter, That Steven is a smart guy!

Update soon!

RhythmOfMySoul chapter 16 . 10/4/2006
Yeah, this chapter was hot. It was really intense and very well thought out.

Sorry for the late reviews! School is killing me too!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Good job with this one!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 15 . 10/4/2006
this chapter was chill, very well written.

I loved it
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