|Reviews for Sweethearts|
| Leah Bo-Beah chapter 16 . 10/1/2006
I abolutely adore this chapter, Vicky. ADORE. Update, update, update. ) I freaking love Steven.
| Tzotel431 chapter 15 . 9/24/2006
Amazing chapter, really. Its okay about the long wait, if its okay about the long wait for the review...school is hectic...evilness...
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 14 . 9/16/2006
Aw. I love the homosexual stuff in this story. I have a lot of homosexual friends and a couple homophobic friends and i can relate to everyone, you know?
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 13 . 9/16/2006
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 12 . 9/16/2006
Wow, okay. Some REAL hatred going on around here.
I guess I do understand what Paul is going through. It's sad because I have such a great relationship with my older brothers and they're about Topher's age.
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 11 . 9/16/2006
OH SNAP! I loved Johnny's last line...that was beast.
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 10 . 9/16/2006
hm. I wonder what the plan is...
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 9 . 9/16/2006
OR LOVE! L as in Love, laughter or LOVE!
hehe. anyway, great chapter. i loved the insight at the end
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 8 . 9/16/2006
Great chapter! Loved it!
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 7 . 9/16/2006
I wonder if Paul and Johnny's friendship will suffer because of this...
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 6 . 9/16/2006
oh. my. gosh.
THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVER! I LOVE IT!
this chapter was SO GREAT!
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 5 . 9/16/2006
| Tzotel431 chapter 14 . 9/9/2006
This was a wonderful chapter, for all the badthings that happened, it was really good!
Update soon and I'll read sooner this time, I promise!
| Tzotel431 chapter 13 . 9/9/2006
The english project was good, sorry I haven't reviewed in ages! I was on vacation and then school started and so many people had updatedwhile I was gone!
This and the last chapter were good! I'm gonna keep reading!
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 4 . 9/7/2006
Good, but as I said earlier, the interesting stuff kind of tapers off towards the end.
ending with a cliffhanger can help that, that way people are out of their seats like, "WHOAH, what's going to happen next?" you know?
it feels like as you're bringing the chapter to a close you're bringing the WHOLE story to a close, like, instead of having some conflict or SOMETHING that continues into the next chapter so that it doesn't feel closed, you just end the chapter...i don't know how to explain it...