Reviews for Sweethearts
Leah Bo-Beah chapter 16 . 10/1/2006
I abolutely adore this chapter, Vicky. ADORE. Update, update, update. ) I freaking love Steven.
Tzotel431 chapter 15 . 9/24/2006
Amazing chapter, really. Its okay about the long wait, if its okay about the long wait for the is hectic...evilness...

Update soon!

RhythmOfMySoul chapter 14 . 9/16/2006
Aw. I love the homosexual stuff in this story. I have a lot of homosexual friends and a couple homophobic friends and i can relate to everyone, you know?
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 13 . 9/16/2006
Good job!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 12 . 9/16/2006
Wow, okay. Some REAL hatred going on around here.

I guess I do understand what Paul is going through. It's sad because I have such a great relationship with my older brothers and they're about Topher's age.
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 11 . 9/16/2006
OH SNAP! I loved Johnny's last line...that was beast.
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 10 . 9/16/2006
hm. I wonder what the plan is...

great chap
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 9 . 9/16/2006
OR LOVE! L as in Love, laughter or LOVE!

hehe. anyway, great chapter. i loved the insight at the end
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 8 . 9/16/2006
Great chapter! Loved it!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 7 . 9/16/2006
Haha. Interesting...

I wonder if Paul and Johnny's friendship will suffer because of this...
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 6 . 9/16/2006
oh. my. gosh.


this chapter was SO GREAT!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 5 . 9/16/2006
interesting twist

great chapter
Tzotel431 chapter 14 . 9/9/2006
This was a wonderful chapter, for all the badthings that happened, it was really good!

Update soon and I'll read sooner this time, I promise!

Tzotel431 chapter 13 . 9/9/2006
The english project was good, sorry I haven't reviewed in ages! I was on vacation and then school started and so many people had updatedwhile I was gone!

This and the last chapter were good! I'm gonna keep reading!

RhythmOfMySoul chapter 4 . 9/7/2006
Good, but as I said earlier, the interesting stuff kind of tapers off towards the end.

ending with a cliffhanger can help that, that way people are out of their seats like, "WHOAH, what's going to happen next?" you know?

it feels like as you're bringing the chapter to a close you're bringing the WHOLE story to a close, like, instead of having some conflict or SOMETHING that continues into the next chapter so that it doesn't feel closed, you just end the chapter...i don't know how to explain it...
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