Reviews for Sweethearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I just started to read your story and its pretty good. I'm not gonna lie the whole Johnny being Homophobic is a lil odd since his dad is gay. Idk I just would have seen it different but it makes the story interesting. I'm diffently gonna keep reading after you put up more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loove this story. Its such a cute idea. My first crush on a guy was in 1st grade then he moved away and I still wonder to to this day where he is right now. If somehow I have come across him over the years, I would never realize it would have been him probably. But anyways I don't like that you had Johnny kiss Emma. But at the same time, it makes the story interesting too. All I have to say is that I hope that Paul and Emma do end up together sometime or another lol Update soon,k? love it bye! |
![]() ![]() Hey,I don't write, but I read and I love your story. I think it is awesome. I like the last chapter especially and I am excited to know what happens next. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o, Johnny has a crush on Emma! HAHAHAHA! PLEASE, UPDATE soon! :Kait |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much, I wonder if Emma will figure out that Paul IS her Paul. I hope so update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I love Emma's comments to Johnny, they're update soon, I can't wait to read the rest of this story.:Kait |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, I love this story. it is definitely going on my favorites list! I love Emma, exspecially when she told off Johnny, that was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Has potential. I'll have to read more though... ;) Keep up the good work, * Books4mE * |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting, fast paced and i am looking forward to finding out how paul knows her |