|Reviews for Edge 8|
| drats chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I always just manage to find good looking stories once they've been taken down don't I? Hmfpt. Anyway, when you categorized it drama you weren't kidding. Just random curiosity, would it also fall under supernatural? Because it sounded like it would have. Which makes me all the more sad that I missed it. It was quite original which I liked, it actually reminded me of a movie thats going out in cinemas sometime this year... they didn't get the idea from you I hope. Though you have to admit, if that were true it would be pretty awesome. Anyway, yes. The first chapter was a good one. Can't say the same for the rest but I'm sure it was too, so good job. :)
| grassong chapter 19 . 5/29/2009
this sure was an interesting story
one question: how old was curver?
oh.. and another: did he like cass?
| burning in effigy chapter 19 . 4/15/2009
fricking bejeezus. just read this thing in two hours. my eyesight is shot, i still have to finish reading the sound and the fury, i slept for four hours last night and it's 12 fricking am (sorry for rant)
anyways, loved this story. kind of more blunt and less.. wordy(?) than your others, but i liked this one a lot. a lot a lot. the ending was all "what?" but i guess it's up for interpretation and i like how you kind of left it open ended. i hate it when you hear a song and then you think it means one thing and read an interview with the music artist that the song is actually about something else. that's just stupid and annoying.
curver. hmm.. reminds me of that guy who did all that stuff with peanuts. he was an interesting character. love his humor though. i probably wouldn't like him if he were real, but since he's not real, he's a very interesting person. sad when he died :[ but totally saw that coming with his breakdowns and whatnots.
kiwi. reminds me of the bird in australia... the ones without the capability to fly or whatever. funny animals. she seemed a little bland to me, but maybe it's because curver and vex and zed were all crazy weird. cassidy was all calm and was like the one keeping curver all balance (mentally and... yeah, mentally). uber sad when she died. speaking of her death, vex is one crazy shit faced moose. mmhm
yep. that's about it. enjoyed the story and the plot and the whole supernatural thing. creative and different and just kind of nice :]
| mezzles chapter 19 . 3/21/2009
Wow I loved it! The ending was sad, but I guess you can safely say it's happy at the same time. But poor Kiwi [
I thought the romance would be centered around Kiwi and Curver in the end, but I guess I was wrong P
Thanks for the read, another favourite.
| Poptart Guava King chapter 19 . 1/25/2009
oh my good lord.
i actually cried!
| Elle Winters 9 chapter 19 . 1/12/2009
sad, but beautiful. i really like how you reflected this on an issue that's occurring today. they fact that you used the words 'terrorism' and i think you also added 'racism' but i don't remember. nice.
| Elle Winters 9 chapter 8 . 1/12/2009
It's in the sugar! no how dare they contaminate lollies. How DARE they!
| maipigen chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
interesting so far, i have to go to work but will return asap;)
| Duuude chapter 19 . 11/11/2008
I loved that last line.
I'm kind in shock by the way. I really can't believe it's over, my eyes kind of hurt too. I've been staring intently at the screen for a while, like I'm looking for something.
Ahh, but I have to face facts, it's over. As much as that makes me wanna throw myself out the window.
And yes, you were that good. You have nothing on how Harry Potter geeks felt on the last page of the Deathly Hallows. NOTHING.
Gosh, and you made me feel so connected to the characters. I'm sad to see them go. I'm gonna go play sad music and wallow now.
BTW. This was an awesomely awesome story. You are amazing. Remember that. )
| Duuude chapter 18 . 11/11/2008
Ah! I laav it, I just laav it.
I'm seriously in love with this story!
Is that possible? No?
Well, it happened to me! I might be in love with you too btw, don't be scared off.
I love Kiwi, I liked her at first even in the beginning. I hated Vex, I'm sure you meant us to hate him. Cassidy(RIP) was just loveable as was (RIP). I'm hoping Kiwi won't be another RIP cause I know Curver will. (
*goes off to cry in the corner*
| Duuude chapter 17 . 11/11/2008
Hm... I wonder. Does Kiwi feel for Curver? In the lovey-mushy way I mean... Seems like it.
Who wouldn't though? He's just so cool.
It's sad that he's dying. It may seem like there isn't any emotion in this but really, I'm dying on the inside.
Not only because he's dying but because there are only two chapters left. That makes me more sad.
| Duuude chapter 16 . 11/11/2008
Have you got a killer imagination or what?
First, Resistance and then this. You have to got to be up there somewhere with those other godly fictionpress writers who don't deserve to NOT be published.
You are gonna be big, my friend.
In the mean time, I love love loved this!
They idea has been done but you have found a way to put a unique spin on it. I love how you play out the rivalry between the "altered ones" and the humans. I've always had a thing for those kinds of stories.
Anyway, this was great. I'm glad that idiot finally came around.
And when he was about to kill what'shisname I was having a little fit in my room. How dare he act all natural and buddy-buddy when he was consorting with the enemy all along? He killed CASSIDY!
This was me:
"KILL THAT BITCH! KILL THAT BLOODY BITCH! POP HIM ONE! GO!"
Ah and my maniac side was satisfied when he plummeted. )
Hahaha. On to the next chapter!
| notfortheintelligent chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
A truly kickass start. One of your best actually.
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Wow... they just blew a little girl's head off... sounds like my kind of beginning!
Your main guy sounds sexy, naturally. ;D