She is dead! Is Kiwi going to take thecure, or is she going tostay human, cause it must be really irritating to always get thrown around by Curver. And how exactly is she going to destroy her parents?

DEAD! ah. sigh. guess it had to happen. this is still truly great, would be amazing if somehow she came back alive but i suppose that can't happen here.

yay tho. amazing as usual. keep it up.

Nice chapter...too bad about Cassidy though, but I guess it would've been cliched if Curver managed to save her somehow and they all lived happily ever after, and I know you don't do the whole cliched thing (which is what I absolutely love about youyr work!). It sucks too that Cassidy and Curver never really got down to their true feelings about each other, you know? There's no...feeling of closure between them...things were left unsaid, and it just goes to show that it's never too late to tell someone how you feel (hope that didn't sound too sappy...o_O) There's also something weird going on with Vex...I don't know what it is, but I can feel it. Something's not right with his story. Maybe it's just me...but I guess we'll see.

I also like how you're feeding us bits about Curver's past, instead of doing this climatic scene in which everything is revealed, etc etc. It's interesting, that's for sure. :)

Well, keep it up, and I'm glad that you were able to update! Once again, nicely done.

~e_n~

So I feel guilty, seeing as I have this story in my favourites and I don't even review. But I'm going to start from now!

You know, I kind of want to blame everything on Kiwi. And have her be the 'bad guy', which I think is how Curver feels. So that says a lot about your writing.

I love how you're stories always have clues that lead up to the resolution (something that is very realistic too, there are always clues in real life) and I probably should have guessed that Kiwi might be innocent, but reading that 'scene' I just didn't trust her. But...there were the clues about her hating her parents.

Anyhow, this is an amazing story, keep writing like you are and I can't wait for the next update!

*glares furiously* You killed off Cass! gr...well I expected it.C. is so stupid, anyways. oblivious, whatever. Kiwi is probably my favorite character. You're writing C. very well. Well, you have always been good at writing evil characters. I think you should get an award or something for the most original and best written stories. Hell I'll give you one now. Just pretend to receive one and that'll work out.

I think Cass was the nicest character (personality wise)you've ever written (Katlyn was good but she whined too much, of course her life was screwed up by Lure but she shouldn't moved on quicker. is that a word? quicker? But hey,that's just me. You write your stories perfectly fine.)

I guess that's your way of saying the nice guy (girl) finishes last or something.

Huh. This isn't much of a romance is it? I mean there's a tiny bit in the whole Cass being in love with C. and him being oblivious of it. but otherwise it's pretty much him getting action.

M...I'm happy that I'm actually able to review when you're writing the story cause I always find your stories after they're finished. I'm in a morose/energetic (yes I know it's an oxymoron but a good one) because I'm listening to Disturbed (This is the world we live in. These are the the hands we're given...etc..etc)

Luck, and many muses sent to you!

-Avey (The girl who would read your stories all day if she had a chance over going to the movies, unless it had Johnny Depp in it. Sorry but he overrules everyone. It's not you, it's my obsession with Johnny Depp!)

How do you get infected with cure? This was a sad chapter, por Cassidy. Vex should die. Update soon.

this is spookily good... why did Curver suddenly cough up blood? is it after effects of the poison?

They're not linked are they? That would be kinda wierd...Almost like the monster and Dr. Frankenstien in one of the movies...They're linked so when the monster gets shot Dr. F can feel it and he gets this wierd dark spot on his chest, right where the monster got shot...

Poor Curver...He seems really...upset...

Is there any chance you'd make this your second one? Happy ending I mean...

And I suppose there's your death for the story...

damn. first u kill mr. meow (though i dont like cats, but i still have to mention) and now u kill the cass? who's gonna be next? huh?...heh im just kidding. but serioulsy though cass was too great of a character to be killed. oh well maybe her death is what triggers curver to...well do what he's gonna do next...whatever it is. so the story's almost over? dont feel like it.

I'm excited to see what happens next! Please, don't leave us all hanging for a very long time. That's such a mean, mean cliffhanger. XD

I'm not surprised Cass liked Curver. I expected it, actually. You did a nice job of lining it up; subtle hints and the begining (if that wasn't intentional, it's my mistake for noticing them. haha) and then this big blowout at the end.

Although, I think her death (or is it? :O) is startling. It shocked me.

...I'm not upset, though. Cass wasn't really a favorite of mine. I didn't hate her, mind you, I'm just not torn a part over her death. Curver, on the other hand, I'd be so upset if he died.

Or Kiwi. I adore Kiwi.

SO Cass was only shot bya dart, right? She'll be fine? And exactly who is Zed? All we know about him is that he took the cure six months ago, and Nadine's his only friend. Is Curver mad enough to kill Vex?

You're going to kill her off? What are you - freakin crazy! NO! :: runs around in chicken circles ::

nice

: o

no!

i like cass!