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   hi-tanner85 chapter 11 . 10/2/2006 well. i tried to find mistakes in this chapter and i couldnt, lovely as always. ps. i dont care if he's not entirely human, i'd like one for my very own. [:pps. i know that kendra must have a thing for him but im totally lost wether he'll be with her or kiwi,, or maybe someone else, oor no one at all. ahh cant wait till more. |
| tearitrightup chapter 11 . 10/2/2006 he's STILL exhausted? damn. i don't want curver to get sick. he's way too hot. |
| varietyinamillion chapter 11 . 10/2/2006 Awesome chapter this one. Bad curver the pervert, bad! But ooh, things are getting CAN'T be a terrorist! She's too...something. She just can't. Vex can sure, but Kiwi can't. Shall I shutup now? |
| twistedFAerieTALes chapter 11 . 10/2/2006 oh. can't wait for the spiral of doom to...uh...spiral. poor cass. |
| Br0k3n Mug chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 w8d 4 so long |
| Jellified Jello chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 Oh my. I feel really sorry for Kiwi. Yet Curver is still lovable and stuff, no matter how perverted he poor Cassidy, always catching them when they're having... er... interactions? Anyways, I love the story plot! |
| Kiyura chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 Ooh, the plot thickens! And I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter...I swear I thought that I did, but it must have slipped my mind. I'm often reading when it's very late, you see. Delusions caused by fatigue, etc. Heh! Anyway..I still love slutty Curver and his amazing jerkishness. If it's possible, I think I like him even better than I like Lynx! He's def. living up to your other amazing characters! Also, I did notice the tiredness, because I know that you don't just put things like that in there and then let it go. You aren't annoying like that-things ALWAYS come back. One of the many traits I love about you as an author! Your endless building to the plot point, etc...I remember when I found out what the guys were really doing in Resistance (I won't mention specifics in case someone reads this reveiw and hasn't read Resistance yet...GO READ IT IF YOU ARE SUCH A PERSON) and like had a spaz because it was like...oh. OH. OH. AH! And even though it was so random, it was like...obviously it's been leading up to this for some time now. You just didn't see it before..? Anyway I always look forward to your stories because they are full of twists like that! You are great at surprising your readers without having things come completely out of the blue. I love it. Can't wait for the next update! Luvs! |
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 Wow, I loved the humor in this chapter! Snopping thought her underwear? Ha! She won't even suspect! Ah, Curver can be either funny or serious, I love his character!Can't wait for more! |
| InspiredByAKiss chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 Loved the Curver/Kiwi interaction. Perv... but I adore him. And I'm also a little worried about his exhaustion. Looking forward to the important part about his parents.. and of course to more Curver/Kiwi! |
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 god, curver's so goddamned annoying. jeez i'd hate to have him as a brother, roomate...anything! but then again i cant help but love . so kiwi a terrorist? hmm...dont know looks can be decieving but vex? it fits him too well, its too likely. so i dont know. only time will tell i guess...or u and ur updates...which is the same thing. wutever. anyway great chapter. |
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 10 . 10/1/2006 wo. when did u post this up? oh well i liked it. k so now im gonna read the next chapt. |
| hippos-anoonymus chapter 11 . 10/1/2006 ...I like how Curver can use his pervertedness as an excuse to snoop, that's so hilarious, and the tirdness is worrying me, I"m being worried rightn now, and I really don't think Kiwi is part of the blackout group, she's prolly in another human tribe that's a little less...evil, I really think, Vex is slowly poisoning CUrver with like little bits of poison in everything he eats, and then it'll all add up and Curver will get really sick the poor cute stupid pervert... Great job, ure an awesome penmaster! (that sounds like a vaccuum) but I don't think I really have to tell u that, u must already know |
| SkepticCritic chapter 10 . 9/30/2006 It's kind of a shame...It'd be fun seeing what Kiwi thinks of Curver...We don't REALLY need anyone else...But Kiwi's pov would be fun... Grr...I could just smack Curver...He could try to be a little nicer...Kiwi is...She totally swallowed her pride to try and make it all work... |
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 10 . 9/26/2006 Hm, ntohing really happened in this chapter, exept we met a new character. Oh hence the name, ohh, something good must be in the next! Can't wait! |
| twistedFAerieTALes chapter 10 . 9/23/2006 lol. i think theyre both idiots-but hot ones :D |