awesome dream sequence. kiwi and cass are both cool girls, though kiwi might. . . not be?

I guess that works,that was a weird dream thing. He was so aware that he was dreaming thou', that happens to me but not as fully as him. I'm sure it has some reason behind it...update soon.

emo chap indeed, an emo curver is adorable haha. Im sorry about her mom.. I hate vex... but then again we need an antagonist always. And Zed was back! haha that kid is kind of creepy haha but I like him. I also like Kiwi she seems nice. Cant wait till they start socializing more. Great chapter.

i wonder what the dream meant...if i had been taking psych like all of my friends, i could prob analyze it but i can't T.T i also can't wait to see what happens next! :D

god, i love curver. and i love kiwi too. get them together! omg, and the sugar thing was brilliant. about killing the children but not the adults. i didn't think of that. i just thought that vex only put poison in the sugar that curver used. anyways, UPDATE SOON!

Huh. This chapter wazz emo. But it was god. Me no trust Zed. Grr. Actually I'm just a bit paranoid with everything right now. I don't really see the significance of some of these characters yet, but the storyline is starting to come togeter. yay. I really liked this chapter, since it was so mysterious like and just...emo xD

yaya~ anotha chappi

why, hello there, heidi.

-laughs psychoticalli-

anyhow.

uhm. i reallirealli liked this chapter. iono why. i just...did. -feels emo- & then you write that and make me feel LIKE AN ANGST WHORE. -murders self- ugh. people like you make me wanna puke out my guts. yeah. ive been in such a weird mood recentli. it's like... half angst half hyper. OH IT'S WHAT YOU DO TO MY SYSTEM, SCOOL. but bleh. ive been kinda out of it too, to quote yo' review response.

the whole curver's famili burning thing was noice. well, it wasnt noice noice 'cause people burning to death isnt noice, but it was a noice touch. ugh. i dont know how to write that without sounding psychotic. so watev, mk? Woteva.

cassidy was freakay. like. realli freakay. & the whole dream thing kinda made you not trust her later on in the chapter. & im wondering if it was just a dream, or some kinda premonition thingie.

HE SEES DEAD PEOPLE.

but. anyway. the whole thing about curver immediateli thinking it's vex & all the oh so obvious hints ur dropping to us about it being cassidy. when you drop those kinda hints, i never know what to think, 'cause half the time the person who you made us think was the psycho in the first place turned out to be... the psycho. but then you kinda make it look like ur purposeli making it look like it was that person which means it must be some other person. like ugh.

as soon as this chap started off i liked it. teehee. it just had that realli creepi feel to it. & the imageri was realli nice -the barn etc. im a sucker for that kinda thing.

The air wasn’t. . . air.

it was actualli a banana.

dundundun.

“Can you get there in time, sugar?” haha. cassidy was just... so freaki. & the whole sugar thing made it even freakier. o.O.

curver's lil realisation about the humans was hot too. & the way you sorta weaved it into the chap.

I lifted my hand, and then dug my fingernails into the flesh of my palm. m. actualli, with me, i usualli feel pain in my dreams. -feels abnormal-

the whole thing about his dad was all O.o. you weaved it in in a coo' way. im proud, man.

the way that you immediateli throw us into a scene with cassidy is also a nice touch. i mean, you've kinda convinced me alreadi that she's some psycho out to eat curver's & kiwi's babies but by throwing her in straight after the dream makes it all...iono...suspicious. 'cause we're alreadi realli wari of her 'cause she was all psychotic.

& then she's showing loads of concern.

& the plot thickens.

haha. zed's bak. wo. with the freaki nadaline. eep. & the whole sugar thing... you've made us all suspicious about it 'cause curver's all IT'S NAGGING AT ME, MAH HOMIES. IT'S NAGGING. omg. today when i was in scool i went past my lil sister and her group of frends and i was all, "Yoyo Sara and her CREW. sara and her HOMIES." & i made all those hand gesture things & my frends were all laughing. & then later on wen i asked her what her frends said, she was all, "They were all like, is your sister some kind of american gangster wannabe?"

o.O

psh. some people just kant take a joke...

oh oh i luvluved the way you went into all the lighting in the last scene. & it was weirdli romantic, kinda. like all... surreal. & all fantasy like. especialli about him flying into the air with his purdyful wings.

& iono what curtis and kiwis hav in common, mk? so quit being so judgemental, OHK. STOP JUDGING ME.

-cries herself to sleep-

YAY! I've finally caught up!

This is a very intriguing story...it reminds me of Gundam Seed and I miss that show a lot, and the similarity between this story and the show is what made me interested to continue reading it. The main similarity being humans versus altered ones, and them fighting over it...what I would like to know is more about the history of this "cure". I mean, why make it? Why do we need stronger humans? What about all the ethical issues behind this?

I'm lovin' this character, though he's a bit of an ass. ;) And Cassidy...I think I know what's going on with her...but I'm not gonna say just yet, cuz it's speculation...I need more info...

Nice story. Keep up the great work!

~e_n~

Thanks for the update

Finally, another update! :D This story is catching me just as much as the others have. I adore your writing so much it's not even funny! You'd better be getting your ass published, or I will be disappointed that I can't go support you by buying everything you put out. Hehe.

Anyway...Glad that Curver lived. I love him so much as a character...You've done such a good job with him. Your characters are usually interesting and not of the norm, and I really particularly like him for some reason. Could be the fact that he's such a jerk and a perv. That's probably it. Probably my favorite thing about your characters is the fact that the good guys are usually not all that good, and the bad guys are usually not completely bad...everything is such a grey area. It's fascinating.

Anyway...ooh, the sugar? Sneaky. I'm so absorbed right now haha I'm like theorizing in my head frantically as to what's going on with that Nadaline girl...Muah!

Luvs! Hope you update again soon-that was great!

hah! im the first reviewer! woo-hoo! k im done with the glory moment. so zed's back. i pity the kid...so desperate for a friend. maybe rise'll like him...maybe not. i dont think vex is behind the crime, he's too likely to do that kind of thing, therefore i am predicting that the sugar theory is false. they cant solve a mystery that quickly. can they? that dream was very vague and mysterious...im guessin its pretty important? yea so im surprised that u updated on a thurs. u know how school started and all. oh well, it brightened up my day a tad bit. seriously im s'posed to be doin my trig and psychology hmwrk but oh well. its not my fault i get distracted easily. k so uh update.

this is great!i love it!

gasp! no hes so mean...he poisoned the strawberries or something?

uh..kiwi?