Wow, I'm kind of bummed he had to die. I want to cry... ugh... that wasn't supposed to rhyme.

Great story! (as usual) Ending was so sad, but superbly written. Poor Kiwi though...

Keep up the good work!

Its...kinda sad. Heheh, i dun know, i just feel sad. But i still liked it, like your other stories! _

-Jessi

so I can be a little sentimental sometimes.. well, all the time. and when Cass died it broke my heart. what happened to Curver shattered the remaining bits. This ending is so beautiful. so well-crafted. I'm almost having a little bit of a sob fest over here. i love it. i absolutely adore this story!

That was really good. But the ending didn't make much sense to me, was he already dead or.. dreaming? Or was he dreaming then died? I think it's the second one,but whatever. Great job. ]

That was, well, terribly dark and moving. I really enjoyed reading it; thank you.

i hate the ending.. it's soo.. urgh. and i'm more of a kiwi/curver shipper here. haha. but i love it. it's really good.

Aww I remember Hunter from Interrogame. He was awesome. XD

I can't help but feel that Kiwi will pop up later, won't she? Haha

AHAHAHA I was laughing so hard when they just kinda... Randomely... Blew the girls head off. O.o Oh my god. I hate Terry. I can't believe he would just turn on Curver be cause he has the cure. THEN he called him disgusting. . And yes, ANOTHER confusing first chapter. T.T

“After all, I heard anger fuels sex; makes it a little more fiery.” Lol! It was even funnier when he took out a pocket knife!

wow... what i love most about this story is the originality. You like created a whole new world! And the cure nad everything, you're some creative shit. And the last line just blew my mind away baby! The whole thing, I heart it. The whole thing!

Love all your stories hun, haven't read ONE thats dissapointed me. You rock my mind.

That was good. Really good. Not sappy good, like the other ones I read, and loved (sad but true). I love it.

Keep up the good work!

-melai

It was good, I liked it even though there wasn't as much romance as I would've liked. There were hints of it of course but most of the time I wanted something to happen with Kiwi and Curver. So was it only a one-sided relation kind of thing? I would like to believe Curver liked her but it seemed like he only liked her as a little sister. Shoot, that sucks he doesn't like ANYONE in this, it's kind of sad. Or atleast none of that love really reaches beyond friendship.

that was such an awesome concluding sentence. i love love love your work!

Awesome. I don't really like sad endings, but I don't really think this is a sad ending. I mean, he ends up with Cass, right? That's good. So it's not sad. D