| Reviews for Edge 8 |
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   trijinkijapan27 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 SUGAR SUGAR SUGAR SUGAR SUGAR! Oh. I really thought her head got blown off for nothing. Well, more or less. All I can say thus far is a see a little change in the style of your writting. Not only because it's from a guy's POV, either. This should be really interesting :D. I think there was a little error in this, though. "Dangerous, running on rooftops, but would could I say? I was a rebel." Shouldn't it be what could I say? Anyway, I'm glade your posting another story! It's reminding me of the X-men movie XD |
| Jaded Romance chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 GREAT! update soon! sounds really interesting. where did you get this story idea from? did something inspire you or what? |
| Sharon chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Whoa... interesting. Very. Though, I shouldn't be surprised. Haha I can't wait to read more. |
| xoxluurve chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Lmao, very interesting. At first I was a *bit confused, but I'm follwing. . .I'm. . .following. I thought he was a vampire at first, or when you said that he told Terry about his secret that he was, well, GAY. But then I found out he wasn't -.-; haha. I hope to find out more about this "cure" and what it really does to you. . .and why the little girls' head was blown off. _ Ttyl, bye! |
| senslogine chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Woah, awesome. But really weird. Really really weird. |
| shinaynay chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 I am just a tad bit confused.. haha, but I'm sure I won't be in a little while. Imagining people with wings is weird... |
| PearlinTheMist chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 ok man, that chapter was, certainly something alright. I don't quite know what to say about it. It sounds like it's gonna be a good story. so, update soon I guess |
| First of the Geeks chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Oh dear. Excessive amounts of confusion, randomness, killing, and creepiness. (And amazingness. That goes without saying.) But anyway, onto the actual review. So I like the way you started, and how you're not afraid to go against the whole, "I'm an angst ridden girl, LISTEN TO ME!" thing and opt for a male main character. And you have an interesting writting style which doesn't actually make me want to blow my eyes out of my head. However, you have a few moments of confusion in there when it seems as if you were trying to say something but didn't quite know how to say it, so you opted for a semi-colon. Which is ok and all, but it was just something i noticed. And you also have a few typos in there. But ANYWAY. Great beginning and I'm interested in seeing what's to come. |