I started reading this a few days ago with the intention to read the first one or two chapters only, but suddenly it was dark, and I hadn't done any homework, but I was ON THE LAST CHAPTER. And now, I have finally gotten around to reviewing. I really really like this story. Love, even. It's so awesome and *different*. Ugh, my brain won't let me write any of the things I want to say. So I'll just favourite it. And maybe come back one day when my mind isn't mush.

-sighs-

Well, to be truthful, this story didn't have the usual zest that I expected from you, but you DID say that you were negeclting it. Not much romance but an awesome ending. n.n

You have officially made me turn Profane. Haha.

Well, I kinda of started reading this a long time ago and now I started in middle in what was technically yesterday...(midst of the night)

And I just finished it. And my first thought was, "Fuck." This is the first thing I've read that has made me think that.

It's wonderfully written; the peeps in it are very well-rounded and real. The story was good, too. New, but it kinda seemed to talk to me about people and stuff they do and just a lot of stuff that seems familiar. In a good way. :)

Ah, God. Now I am all miserable and sad for Curver.

Jeeze. Dude? Just like that? Oh well, it was still -really- good.

Oh, I love you. ]

What an odd story. I'll have to read this one again, because I'm not sure I caught everything the first time.

But I liked Curver, and at least he got to kill Vex before he died . . . poor left behind Kiwi.

Livi

AH! that was a freakin awesome ending. one of your best, if i may say so myself. i still don't COMPLETELY understandthe whole curver/dad thing, even though most of it was just answered.. but uhm.. ya. once again, AWESOME ENDING! and now i'm off to read tpe on bleeding air.

nice. at least curver gets to be with cass :D and mr. meow )

Just wanted to say thanks for finishing it )

I'm really sad now...I think I kinda anticipated a sad ending all along but...I guess I was holding out hope that it would turn out happily...I think I might cry...Although whether because it's so sad or because I'm sad that it's over, I honestly couldn't tell you...

Ai! I wish I could say it was a horrible ending. But I can't. It was a good ending, I just didn't like the way it ended. I mean, that is a mean ending! Are you going to make a sequel, from Katri, Kiwi, and Terry's perspectives? You should.

Whoa. Best yet.

fuck. he died? how could you? and i thoguht that he and kiwi would get togehter too...

haha. that was effing beautiful you ho' bag. i hearthearthearted that ending. it was just... perfect. and so pretti. and the whole way you tlked about the shattering thing all the way through and then linked it all together -and all that awesome psych one his parents etc. & then the way they were always chasing each other in the dreams. it so makes sense now.

& this ending's left me all a pangin'. it was still perfect, tho. wouldnt hav had it any other way -the wink-

interesting ending.

I noticed that you said "Katri" instead of Kiwi a couple of times near the beginning of the chapter. I assume that was a mistake?