nice. I'm glad you didn't make them find some miraculous cure last minute to save him, although to be honest I knew that wasn't likely.

he died?

i don't get the last part! ): what happened to katri? she died? ohnoohno. poo poo.

Aw...it makes me sad. I realize that Curver wasn't the greatest nor nicest person...but still...I had grown attached to him, just like Kiwi...there was SOME good in Curver, it's just too bad he had carried the hate around for so long, and this...lie...wow. :(

I was expecting Curver to die, honestly. But I was also wondering whether there would be an epilogue based on Kiwi's POV, and what happens with Blackout. Ah well. Guess we can only assume, right?

:(

Nicely ended though. I liked how you referenced the shattering sky again. Nice touch indeed. :)

Can't wait to read your other fics! A job well done on this one! :) :)

Til next time,

~eternal-nemesis~

Ok, so, I had this nice review all typed up and stuff and I pressed submit and stupid fictionpress bails on me!

Anyways...

That was an awesome chapter. I really like how you have a good balance of dialogue and descriptive fillers/non-dialogue. I'm just such an impatient person and tons and tons and paragraphs of unnecessary filler in-between dialogue just bothers me but I like your writing style. :) Thanks for another great chapter!

I really like your story, it kept my intrest the entire time!

I liked it. It wasn't entirely sad or bad ending, since the bed guys didn't win. But it wasn't entirely happy because Curver still died...I didn't even cry...I loved it!

Holy... That was such a great ending! Well, I say that - the whole story was fantastic! Seriously! Loved it.

Your story is really good,

Is it kind of like X-men and the Matrix...

It is really good.

um...yeah. Your muse is giving me scary looks. Interesting ending. I'm sad its done. I think you rushed it a bit tho...:) love it,tata till your next story. wat're you planning?

Woh! Oh, Curver, you silly dead boy. I love him so much though! I liked the way you ended this with, like, kind of an openness to it, like most of your stories. I mean, Curver could have just dreamed Cassidy there completely and he could be going to hell. Or he could just be going...nowhere, and have no afterlife. I choose to believe that he goes to heaven! Because I am a sap!

I'm also a fan of the way Kiwi never really gets to be happy in the end. And that in last chapter, Curver ended up secretly hating that he had the cure. This was just such a good story! Natural Born is still my all-time fav, but Curver, I think, is my favorite character of all.

I'm so glad that Vex died in the end. And somehow, Curver dying seemed right. I'm not sad about it. It was a good ending-the right ending. Yeeuh!

Anyway, I will keep reading your other stories, of course! See you laatah!

oh wow that was a creative ending. loved the twisted past. i feel bad for kiwi. is this the last chapter? and did katri really die? ah so many questions. at least he'll see cass soon. loved it. great job!

why is it that i have a feeling kiwi will betray curver, despite her uhm... "affections" towards him... *shrugs* perhaps it's the way you write your stories that made me feel that there's gonna be some kinda twist at the end...

) surprise me. update soon yeah?

it's been a while, kiddo, but i've finalli decided to grace you with one of my awesomeli awesome reviews. my tummy's friggin killing me, btw. you should know that. YOU REALLI SHOULD. -painpain- & the chocolate does nothing cept for hurt my teeth 'cause of those darn braces.

& now that i'm done talking about myself.

onto the chapter.

ugh. coffee. you're effing obsessed with coffee. why dont u just go and shove some up yo ass while ur at it, yeah? hang yourself from some pole & get some homosapien to pour it down ya bumhole. -bitchi moment- i bet you dream about moments like those. I BET YOU DO.

wow. curver's having an emo moment. WHAT IF I DIE? that's so hawt. i want one of those moments. WHAT IF I DIE 'CAUSE OF THIS AWESOMELI EVIL PAIN IN MAH TUMMY (i think it's yo' baby, kelli). i want to be a man now. man me plz. omg. i just had a thought. you know when men get sex changes and go all female, do they start having periods? that would be so awkward...

“Slumber party?” I inquired. “Can we beat each other with pillows in our underwear?” I feigned excitement. “Can we call boys and then hang up and giggle?” LMFAO. haha. my (ex)frend used to do that. prank call guys she liked & then sit there giggling. then she'd ring me & ask me if i wanted the numbers of the guys that i liked so that we could do it together. i declined -woman with shame-

kiwi looks like she's about to go clubbing? i sense a lil "Oh mah gawd curver ah think ur hawthawt so i'm here to impress you & make your last night on earth hawthawt(ness) going on over here. hawdeehaw. -insert elegant snort-

aww. curver's such a bulli. what with the silent treatment and all. he's probabli just thinking of me -pompous- kinda like how you were thinking of me when you wrote this chapter -winkwink- come on home gal, let's go clubbing. -bounces- i'll buy you a beer & we'll be -quotes- "Inseparable"

SNORT.

-mucus moment-

-wipes with sleeve-

wow. kiwi's going all I WANNA BE MUTATED. cool dice, man. unexpected tho. "Bleeding into each other" that's such a deep line. almost as deep as the blood that bleeds -deep- & we kall that alliteration. im hungri. & i pity my stomach. you pity it too plz. like i pity george. george deserves pity. & i like the way that curver actualli hates the cure. nice lil ol' bit o' psychologi there jelli man kelli. you deserve a fig. -figs out- 'cause ur a pig.

aww. poor kiwi. & this is so gonna hav a sad ending. that sucks. why dont you make it happi. my tummy hurts for me to tell you exactli what to write but come on mate MAKE IT HAPPI. meh. im gonna go whine now. i want a water bottle wahh...

AHA! can't wait can't wait can't wait can't wait.

curver cannot die! ):

NONONONONONO! KIWI IS EVIL!