Reviews for In it for the Oil
BrokenandBeautiful chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
omg so true...i dont know what it is but i really LOVE it. good job..it reads very smoothy..good work!
johnlance chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I think this is a great poem. The only line were I thought the diction was lacking was when you said, "in tons of different places".I do agree that the idea wasn't origanal though. Keep on writing, and keep on fighting the man! P.S Whoever said that this poem "sucked" is a idiot.
ashleigh chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
this pretty much sucked.
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
The rhyme in this was nice. It flowed quite well and sounded natural, not contrived. However, I find the diction in this piece is lacking. It’s too vague and simplistic for my liking. There’s no depth to this poem. It’s just words on a page. While I won’t say if I agree with your point of view or not (because this is review is about poetry, not politics), I will say that these feelings have been expressed a million times. If you’re going to say it again, you should find an original, interesting way to say it. Other wise this is just another ‘America is oil-thirsty’ poem.