Reviews for The SeaVision
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Quite elegant and emotionally moving. I did particularly favor the motif of water, sand, sun and the feeling of rising to meet adversity. The assonance in line "shoals and stony points" was appealing. Very nice.
Ophelia's Crown chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
ah so you're finally 'finished.' ...though all poems are never fully done now, aren't they? well in your attempt to model your work after my favorite poet- you succeeded in capturing his tone, yet I still think that 'your' tone suits you better. and although I don't know whether to be gracious that I 'helped' in fabricating this wonderful set, or to be worried I am now impersonating Shiva... I'm still very sure of one thing- that it was beautiful.