Reviews for Can't Escape
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
not really one of your best (in my opinion) but i still like it!
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
How awful. I can't imagine not being able to write. That would be torture! Well done, nice poem!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
So you say writing is your freedom, and yet you cannot write more? Does that mean you are still a slave, and if so, to what? to whom? You need out from what?

Yes, your haiku presents a number of questions.

You should answer them with a follow up haiku, extend with some more literary devices: imagery, metaphor, parallelism, etc.
Basara chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 it or was it errm...running out of ideas in writing? ...I can't tell...could I make a suggestion?... try to sing some angsty or underground music to release pain? ...( that's what I do also... )

great work...)
Montiago chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
pretty good

and, to everyone else...theres a reason its short...its a fucking haiku...
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
IT sucks to not be free...short n sweet,eh?
Jane Piper chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
very is a release...and you expressed it work.

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kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Sad! I hope you keep writing! Very short.