Deatiled, and a bit strange, but that's alright.

Nicly written. Keep up your good work.

sweet. hehe. I really like this story and your characters. Keep goign! You should continue this story, even if you wanted it to be short. It is so interesting! I love the setting of it all. good job! I like more description, but thats just me. keep going!

I like Western fics. People nowadays don't appreciate Western movies as much as they should. All people who are fans of Samurai movies should love westerns. Hell, did you know that Sergio Lione's "A fistful of dollars" was a remake of "Yojimbo?" Lots of western movies are remakes of samurai movies. Also, the concept of western movies and Samurai movies are all the same. Well, that's all I have to say. Good story.

Peace, Love, Triangle!

Darket