| Reviews for Life can be a bitch, can't it? |
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   paledaisy78 chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 this story is good so far. it will be interesting to see the relationship between Manny and Derek develop. write more! |
| afk chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 aww poor manny, but gawd being called proky... -_- not very nice |
| StarDust Rocker chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 Aww, poor Manny. I'm sure Derek can make it better with some hot sex, I'm sure. XD And while we're on the topic of things you have going what happened to the callab with yousa and Jma? Hmm? HMM? I luff your stories. ) |
| kimper chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 This one is awesome. Perhaps one of my favorites thus far. It's great to see such an awkward character, round and a bit unsocial in a story. And it's so well done. You've shown his feelings/thoughts wonderfully. I'm so excited to see how his story progresses. Yay for the underdog sort of thing, ya know? |
| Ladako chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 This story is actually interesting. And I feel kind of bad for Manny, poor little guy hasn't had the best school life and it must have hurt him a lot to make sweat and cry. C ya! |
| princess max chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 Dude, I LOVE it. *cries* don't bug me about Kurt and Travis. I am The Die at work right now:( |
| Fim chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 Hehe, I have a friend named Derek Carter. What colour is this one's hair? Oh dear, I'm going to derive great amusement from this for all the wrong reasons. |
| Dam chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 Don't really know what to say behalf that I enjoyed this begin of novel so I would be glad to see what will happened. Thanks for your work ;) |
| eldrin chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 I'm not sure at all what I think about this: it doesn't seem to have your usual spark, but there certainly isn't anything to dislike about it. Already Manny comes off as a bit pathetic...but then, there's not much about him yet! This could be a good story, but for now, I think that it seems a little overplayed for such a short section of writing. I love the dialogue, and Derek's section is lovely. His thoughts are subtly revealing and provide a delightful counterbalance to Manny's reactions. |
| kjnhgtfrdefgh chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Another one? WOOT! haha. This sounds REALLY interesting, lol. I'am looking forward to how this goes. PLEASE update soon! - Celie |
| ddz008 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 Interesting story! :)Derek doesn't seem bad... and Manny has real self-esteem problems, but he is nice. Hope you update soon! :D |