|Reviews for Jarhead Jesus|
| contrast and friction chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
This is truly brilliant. I absolutely love the collision of politics, religion and military images and references - it's beautifully crafted.
Love all of the stanzas in italics. Excellent write.
| Arisu Morin chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
wow, that was awesome! it was so passionate and i love the tie in of the war, the bible, and random songs. very vivid. great job, keep writing.
| primal injection chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
I thought this was fantastic. Every line brings a new intensity to it. I found some parts slightly sarcastic but i thought it added depth to the political messages. Some sickly humour but i like it.
| oxytocin chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
This is alarming in its truth and clarity. I really like your style. I perceived this as being darkly humourous, and quite sarcastic. I love your thinking, and the imagery is made to shock. Good work.