|Reviews for The Last ones Standing|
| lklittle chapter 2 . 7/18/2006
It seems as if you're afraidof paragraphs, quotations, and you're not too fond of dialogue. Never fear, I am here. The dialogue is confusing. Instead of just typing down whatever they said put "..." said charactername. But don't let my review get you down, don't stop writting and keep it up.