Reviews for Cinderella
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
I loved this. I thought the grim tone telling the story was a breath of fresh air, and I thought the construction and writing was very good, too. I'm not usually a fan of the italics, parenthases, but you did it very well. chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
I like the poetic twist combined with the fairy tale. Your vocabulary was very impressive and the imagery comes straight-to-mind. Very lovely~
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
"caustic tears erode her porcelain poppy ruby lips and she cannot kiss"

Simple brilliance.
GLP chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
violins sketch out the final chords of her

oh, i love that line. iz x
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

That last line - "she cannot kiss" - owns me; it completely has me bound and had me screaming brilliance toward this piece, amongst other praises.


You are officially on my Author Alert.

~* Noelle
Iris Early chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
This is amazing. The brackets and the reiteration really add to the atmosphere and meaning. It reminds me a little of some Edgar Allen Poe stuff, the title of which currently escapes me. The adjectives and their placement are also fascinating. You are wonderful and I love you. x
love-is-hate chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
wow this is so good and like atmospheric? if that makes sense lol x