|Reviews for Chaos of the Wolves|
| Polka-Dot-Zebra chapter 4 . 11/2/2007
I find this story slightly confusing. It could be because I'm too lazy to scout out my contacts so that I can read easily. It seems like the scene changes too often, and it's hard to follow the flow of the story. I feel unsure of what's going on, and the way the years keep changing makes me feel left out. The story has potential, I just think it needs a little tweaks here and there to help it shine.
Helen Burke Post