Reviews for Woman's World: Insurrection
nethernity chapter 23 . 4/30/2007
so,you're gonna publish it?

i live in Singapore and Indonesia.

i'm afraid they won't sell it there.T-T
jailbyrd chapter 6 . 4/24/2007
I would consider revising the last sentence of this chapter. I now have the song "Reunited and it feels so good..." stuck in my head.
jailbyrd chapter 2 . 4/24/2007
My thoughts for today on this chapter are as follows:

I love the new strength that you have given to the Poetess. These are things that I would have liked to see sooner, but you timed it write and it fits well. i am glad to be seeing new dimensions of her character.

What is her name though? I know she has one; she was not born the Poetess. Even the Empress has a name, a befitting one at that.

I love how you have set forth a plan in this chapter and I am excited to see how all is accomplished.

Now I am going to scamper along to Chapter 3...
El Duckie chapter 23 . 4/23/2007
Glad to see that we won't have to be hanging till the book is published.

Embarassing to say, but I forgot who Charolyn since its been a while. To make it weirder, I read "Charolyn was pregnant" as "Carowyn was pregnant"... that was an awkward moment. I had to check back before I could remember. ;
ddz008 chapter 23 . 4/20/2007
Interesting chapter! I'm glad that you may be published! :) Must be exciting! I wasn't expecting that Charolyn had saved the fetus. I hope that the ending isn't too sad... they deserve to be happy. Hope everything goes well with the baby! Update soon please!
Pen'NInk chapter 23 . 4/20/2007
Having spent the last five days pouring over the Woman's World trilogy, I am pleased to be finally sending you a review.

First off, let me state that you are a very talented individual. Creating sympathetic characters, an interesting plot, AND a believable setting is no small feat. Even better, you have maintained all throughout the trilogy with only a few minor difficulties.

That said, I have to say that the first in the trilogy was my favorite. I enjoyed your characterization the most in that story, and felt that you wove the fabric of the Poetess and Shae quite well.

The second in the series though, was beautiful in its plot. While, yes I adored the first, I was RIVETED to the second. Characterization was still strong as you introduced us to your new, more embellished set of characters.

This third in the series, however, feels somehow shorter than the other two, weaker. I understand that it is still quite freshly written and will eventually be tweaked here and there, but even though the plot's strong and the descriptive backgrounds are fine, it feels like your characterization has lessened somewhat. Characters I once adored now seem distant, as may be realistic given their standings within the plot, but it's not entirely the plot that has changed them.

Perhaps it's just been a change within your/the Poetess's voice…?

Please except my critique as being helpful-by no means am I "flaming" or putting you down. I adore your stylistics and have grown fond of your characters, and am only making a note from my perspective.

I look forward to reading your next chapter!
Copper Skies chapter 23 . 4/20/2007
It's finishing. *Sniff*. I'm going to miss this. Anyways, this chapter actually gave me the shivers, at that bit where all the people were giving their food to the Poetess. The realism was...*wow*. And I was just wondering, have you got a name for the Poetess or is she just 'Poetess'?
CaleeChanteuse0305 chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
ah yes. this is why we love you. i practically pulled a 'tom cruice' by jumping on my sofa when i opened the author's alert e-mail informing me that you updated! woohoo! keep up the good work!
Scales of Sapphire chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
Dear Savannah,

Even though we hate you for making us thing you weren't going to update (Even though you clearly said you were), and for all these plot twists, and for rearranging things and in general being annoying... we love you.

-Reviewer X

I'm so happy for you! *hugs Savannah til she is blue*

Its such an exciting thing to see one of our fellow fictionpress members get a letter like that! Anyways, this chapter seemed a bit rough, and rushed feeling (I had almost forgoten about Charolyn being pregnaut)and such a mean cliff hanger there too! You've already got me itching to read more!

Good luck again! (If I'm excited/nervous I cant imagine the way you feel!)

Happy Writing!

JDWrites chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
Hey you! I've missed you oh so much! It is a bit unrealistic but hey, this is your story, you do what you want with it...except kill Shae. You can't kill him!

Jay: I dunno, you can kill him if you want in my point of view...oh yeah, I think you'll find this amusing, Gaki's decided that I'm her Animus. Anyways, I can't wait for the arrival of the child...children are always good.

Ren: *pops his bubblegum*

Thad: EEK! I CAN'T WAIT, HURRY SAVANNAH HURRY! I gotta know what's gonna happen! Thank you very much for updating.

YESH! Thanks Savannah, I'd have stalked you if you didn't.

Love, Gaki
pangur chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
Okay, first of all, congratulations and I will definitely buy your books WHEN they are published. also, Khristen and Mercoush? Okay... at first, that was weird, but then Khristen explained that she and Mercoush both recognize that they can't replace their former loves, and that made it better. and it's better than Khristen and Carowyn at least. Honestly, I still feel bad for Carowyn, hopefully he turns gay or finds a girlfriend or SOMETHING, poor guy. Unless shae decides to die and then Carowyn steps in? That won't happen though, so yeah, something needs to be done for Carowyn, definitely. Anyway, good luck and update soon :]
J. Rea chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
Wow...that was really sad all over. It was great and made the story seem so much more real. Well the baby thing was kinda wierd but really cool as the Khristen and Mercoush getting together. Great chapter!
snow blossoms chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
the frozen fetus was downright weird. it didn't hit me in the right way. otherwise, the part about closing down immigration, that was terribly sad. T_T that was realistic and a needed touch. i can't wait 'til the next chapter and remember to notify us in case of actual publication! thank you. (:
Calixta chapter 23 . 4/16/2007
Finally, after a hiatus INSURRECTION HAS LIVED! YAYNESS! *jumps around the room at 5 in the morning* Squee :3 Anyway, to my review!

Y'know, while reading Apostasy I really thought that Char had a miscarriage and now *insert dramatic gasp here* her baby lives! Wow. You never know what pops out in the future. They can now freeze babies! :O That and Kirsten as the surrogate mom sounds very noble of her. :)

...I think I died, Savannah. You always kill me with the cliffhangers. All in all this chapter is okay, I give it a thumbs up before I wake up the whole house with my fangirling.

And I thank you in advance for trying to let your story reach the Philippines. I mean... I feel loved! And what reviewer X said ('cept for the annoying bit), we love you.

CaleeChanteuse0305 chapter 22 . 4/9/2007
no! i finally read to the end of this thing and i'm deprived of the ending? impossible! inconceivable! and look, i'm not a ghost reader! please please please at least give me an idea of how it ends so i can have SOME sort of closure

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