Reviews for I went slash |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wellwritten. and i know how you feel... / |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, this one really hit me, ive doen this before too, in fact i did last night, life really suck dont it?anyway, i liek the repetiton |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked this it was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent job! as a fellow cutter i know exactly how u feel *hugs* keep writing! nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel "I went slash" was repeated too many tinmes... But other than that, this was great! You should talk to someone if you feel suicidal. I know what it's like... Try meditating! It works! Trust me, I know... My suicidal "phase", if that's what you want to call it, just ended. I was having a stressful relationship with the person I thought was "mr. right". I ended it, and now I'm suicide free! D But really, if your having depression problems, talk to someone. You can email me, if you want... I'm always free to help anyone who needs it... *::~Cat~::* |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...I'm also tempted to do that but the words "if I could live for something...someone...somehow..." lurks within me...so yeah...I'm still trying to find answers... nice one thou... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i went slash repeated over and over brings it completly into focus.. it makes teh reader forget that there is emotional pain... just seemingly death... its a great poem but why cut when you have such a wonderful outlet in words? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um okay, from the title and description I thought you were saying you were writing slash ficiton now... Interesting poem you got here, unexpected. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no! you gave in... tis sad...though,this is a good poem... *sighs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rythmic, and...realistic? Not quite the word I'm looking for but, it'll do I suppose. I can relate to it. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, it's sad! Be happy! Write on! ~Anna~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate this! |