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wellwritten. and i know how you feel... /

you know, this one really hit me, ive doen this before too, in fact i did last night, life really suck dont it?anyway, i liek the repetiton

i liked this it was really good!

excellent job! as a fellow cutter i know exactly how u feel *hugs* keep writing! nice job!

I feel "I went slash" was repeated too many tinmes... But other than that, this was great!

You should talk to someone if you feel suicidal. I know what it's like... Try meditating! It works! Trust me, I know... My suicidal "phase", if that's what you want to call it, just ended. I was having a stressful relationship with the person I thought was "mr. right". I ended it, and now I'm suicide free! D But really, if your having depression problems, talk to someone. You can email me, if you want... I'm always free to help anyone who needs it...

*::Cat::*

wow...I'm also tempted to do that but the words "if I could live for something...someone...somehow..." lurks within me...so yeah...I'm still trying to find answers...

nice one thou...

i went slash repeated over and over brings it completly into focus.. it makes teh reader forget that there is emotional pain... just seemingly death... its a great poem but why cut when you have such a wonderful outlet in words?

Um okay, from the title and description I thought you were saying you were writing slash ficiton now... Interesting poem you got here, unexpected.

oh no! you gave in... tis sad...though,this is a good poem... *sighs*

Rythmic, and...realistic? Not quite the word I'm looking for but, it'll do I suppose. I can relate to it. Nice work.

Aw, it's sad! Be happy! Write on!

Anna

I hate this!