| Reviews for The Dot |
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   Tailored4Dreams chapter 1 . 12/15/2008 I was scared and disturbed and a little confuzzled at first but all in all its awesome! Dots are secretly everywhere! Tailored4Dreams x o xo |
| review-a-holic chapter 1 . 7/16/2006 heheh...CUTE...but im sure u've written a whoLE lot moRe...am short of time rite now...but will cheCK them all out...thAts a promise... reviewaholic..thats my url..it'll tell you all about me...just registered again...so will take time till i can put something up myself...till then...KEEP WRITIN... me :-P |
| Fire Emblem chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 That really scared me. Seriously. But it was funny. |
| griffensGrace chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 where you on neopets during the great dot war? |
| Waluigi-Freak-99 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 That was . . . strange. Amusing, until you stopped talking about Dot. Dot's the star. I think you should've talked about Dot more. Anyway, you had quite a few run-on sentences and one or two typos that I'd suggest you fix, but other than that, pretty good. Will you be writing more? |