Reviews for The Dot
Tailored4Dreams chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
I was scared and disturbed and a little confuzzled at first but all in all its awesome!

Dots are secretly everywhere!


x o xo
review-a-holic chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
heheh...CUTE...but im sure u've written a whoLE lot short of time rite now...but will cheCK them all out...thAts a promise... ~reviewaholic..thats my'll tell you all about me...just registered will take time till i can put something up myself...till then...KEEP WRITIN...

me :-P
Fire Emblem chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
That really scared me. Seriously. But it was funny.
griffensGrace chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
where you on neopets during the great dot war?
Waluigi-Freak-99 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
That was . . . strange. Amusing, until you stopped talking about Dot. Dot's the star. I think you should've talked about Dot more.

Anyway, you had quite a few run-on sentences and one or two typos that I'd suggest you fix, but other than that, pretty good.

Will you be writing more?