|Reviews for The Ocean, The Waves, The Solitude|
| tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
| Ruby Waters chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
i am imaging a beach just after sunset. two lovers on the beach sitting and watching the waves in silence. oh and with Samantha Mumba's body to body playing on my computer added to the mood. ahh..this poem is really magical and i love the way you repeated 'the ocean the waves the solitude' there is somethingy happy yet sad about this. love it
| frezbo chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Wow, that was really really really really good! i loved the way you spaced it out, how it was all short and simple and straight to the point.
the only constructive criticism i can give is try not to spell it all out for people - try to make them think for themselves. its still great though, its just developing your style! i loved it!
| criti-sized chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Usually I don't give constructive criticism about poetry becuaes I don't know much about it. The poem was really nice, the point of it coming across very clear of what you were saying, I understood it, but there were some things that were semi-abrupt.