Reviews for The Girl on the Skateboard
OutOfTheNight chapter 9 . 5/1/2012
I really like this story... The point of view with the unknown person was pretty cool. I bet I can guess who it is! (Mimi?) I think that you should keep that up with the major pranks,but don't give away their plan!

Write more on this and Flunk! Just found out it's from 2006, and your like 21 or something now, but your really good at funny stories. Have you published anything yet?
kittymobile chapter 9 . 6/16/2007
Hey. I've just finished reading this story and i have to admit, you have me hooked. You're brilliant at description and i get a clear picture of just what is going on.

I know you love flattery ) so i'll keep the constructive criticism to a minimum: there are a few too many commas than needed in places and a tiny amount of typos. Seriously though, other than that, ten out of ten. Both for plot and the way you get it across. Amazing. If you'd like me to i can try and point out typos and stuff for you, just to make your book one hundred percent phenomenal, (at the moment it's like 99.9%) heehee. I hope you like my review and if you have the time could you please take a look at my vampire story? Don't feel pressured into it though. Again, your story is excellent.
CrystallineEyes chapter 9 . 5/30/2007

Upload soon please!

It's really great!

CrystallineEyes chapter 8 . 5/30/2007
Anyway, belated bday and uhmm...advance happy bday kc May na now.


So, will Yamato have feelings for Aiya?

Well, will he?


Boy, am I excited.
CrystallineEyes chapter 7 . 5/30/2007

Love triangle?

Oh man...sana...
CrystallineEyes chapter 6 . 5/30/2007
Yep...chancing tlgah,pro kilig.


CrystallineEyes chapter 5 . 5/30/2007

Serves right for that bastard,nuff said.
CrystallineEyes chapter 4 . 5/30/2007
Please keep on updating.
CrystallineEyes chapter 3 . 5/30/2007

I'm gettin a bit chummy here...

Great work though too short.
CrystallineEyes chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
CrystallineEyes chapter 1 . 5/30/2007

Yeah, i like most of your works. They're cool.

Please update soon.
DemonicDestiny chapter 9 . 1/5/2007
OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next... I kinda think that Mimi (That's her name right?) might be the person behind everything. I don't know why... Heehee, whatever! lol. Update soon.
Niki Tori chapter 9 . 10/8/2006
Dun Dun Dun! Who is the unknown person...Aiya is going to kick their butt with a wooden staff! Also what is the history between Josiah and Yamato? I guess I'll have to wait for the 10th chappie huh?


Anyways this chapter rocked! I loved it SO much!

Until Chappie 10

LoVe You!

Kizuna chapter 9 . 10/8/2006
I wonder what happened a month ago! Please let us know soon!_ And I wonder who the unknown person is! Please update soon, this is so exciting!_~
angelic mind chapter 9 . 10/8/2006
tol! astig ung story mo. :)
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