Reviews for For You Stephanie
The.Most.Beautiful.Lie chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Hey!This is so sweet! This stephanie is really lucky to know someone like u
antigonelives chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
YOUR: a possessive. "Your poetry needs to be edited."

YOU'RE: you are. "You're here already?"

Learn the difference. Spellcheck will not pick up on usage in the case of your/you're, their/there/they're, effect/affect, and so on. Have someone look over your poetry before you post it, and don't let it be a friend; those are partial to saving your self-esteem by lying. If you're in school, try an English teacher, as they're mighty helpful about looking over your work.

Don't capitalise random words; capitalise proper nouns (Euro Disney, Uncle Bernard, the Knights Templar), the first letter of a line of poetry (optional), and you get the drift.

"I Hope You Feel Better Steph" - first of all, CAPITALISATION, agh. When addressing a person by name, add a comma, like this: "I hope you feel better, Steph."

"Hes" - apostraphe necessary. Stands for "he is," therefore, "he's."
cloud chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
hey i just read all ur poems i think they are really gd i jsut wondered if i cud lke u a few questions cuz im doing an assignment/essay and i wanted to write an emo story , but then i realised i don kno alot about emos so could u help?
Dragonscribe chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
AW! Man, if i got a poem like that i would hug that person to death. Hope you gave it to her, that would cheer anyone up. Awesome work.
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
hey, a love peom for your special someone! AW! its so cute! ok sry, forgot, your emo... you aren't considered 'cute' but thats judging...anyway, im confusing myself..good job on your love poem!~liz