|Reviews for Mantra|
| Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Sounds like the mantras that've been flying 'round my head for about two months now... some things never go away... some things we cannot run from... some people never return (despite our beseeching)... and yet we "need to believe, have to believe," and still "cant escape" the "empty vortex of feeling."
Nice job... couldn't have said it better myself!
Truly Tourterelle... (a bewildered day)
| onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Lol.. Now I think it's stuck in my head..
I love the layout of this.. It really breaks down each part and emphasizes the montra. Amazing job!
| lostfish chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Wow, as I say to a lot of great poetry, very ambiguous. I think of schizophrenia, or some unknown horrors inside a person. Very good imagery.