Reviews for Lobotomy
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
pretty. original, too. i love the concept. & i really like your style, but i think, after reading quite a bit of it, that it's a little too haphazard. your imagery is amazing, but it rarely links together. & that's fine when that's what you intend, but when it's every time, everywhere - i just think it could be so much more. lovely work, though.

drippingdreams chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Intriguing. I really like the lines "Love, that tasted nice./Life, left a sour taste." and "Sympathy equals lobotomy." The end is really good too. Nice descriptions.
EvT chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Lots of angst here eh? But, I really do like this piece. ) Especially the beginning. Banging my tongue against doors must be rather painful though. xP Brilliant imagination.