|Reviews for Last Thoughts|
| taylor chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I really liked this poem. I thought it was very artistic. I like where it saise Monsters lurking in the dark,
Pacing furiously, waiting to leave their mark,
| Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
This is dark, but I find myself liking it. The repetitions are great. My favorite lines, I have to say, were /Life is a black and bruital quest/It stabs you in the back and again in the chest/ It flows quite nicely. Kudos. CD
| Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Your diction is excellent. It's so...vivid. A great job.
| Coda Lovelance chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
I really liked the lines "There’s a rope, but nothing but slack,/Out of space, out of time."- really good imagery! The repetition of "out of space, out of time." adds a sense of continuity to the piece, and then, with it's final usage:finalization/completion.
| On The Esplanade chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Very nice job.
I liked the repetition of that one line. The whole thing was very classic but still fresh and unique. I especially liked the line about the rope.
| not jackie chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
"out of space, out of time". gorgeous.