Reviews for Maybe
writing-to-save-my-soul chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
very good. mi quite like it!
ArchDemonNotion chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
that's pretty good.

"...Maybe, just maybe

the past becomes the wind,

Sending you forward..."

i understand that part the most. It makes so much sense. Maybe...because I dwell on past things, or used to, still do from time to time, but i forget that i have to move forward...and i guess that's what the good memories are for.
blue704 chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
i identify with this...i know this feeling of doubtfulness, i'm feeling it now.

it takes a great poet to dig into one's soul yet not know it
plummet chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
I love how all your poems have multiple meanings, represent dozens of feelings all at once. This reminds me of the song 'May It Be' for some reason. Great song, great poem. )
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Maybe, just maybethe past becomes the wind,-absolutely lovely.

the touch in this is impecable, though i always do wonder who are you talking about
mezzie chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
good reminder that things always change : )

mezzie
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Cool. I really like this.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I like the whole direction thing.. nicely done
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
This is so excellent. Wonderful poem. Keep writing!

Anna _
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
So sweet and upliting. Very nice.
Mettermi A Dormire chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Hmm..me like because it's kind of confusing, like one of those poems you kind of don't get at first because of the parentheses, but you find out and its special to you.

Btw, cant the wind push you back, also?
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Loved the ending. Well written, awesome job. Keep'em coming!
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Meep meep...

I like, wait, love. I don't know why...
The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Beautiful - reminds me of the song Winding Road by Bonnie Somerville. I especially love this since I just got back from a journey of my own and can relate to your words. Amazing clarity and insight. Keep writing, s.
Plinky chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Lovely. Feels so hopeful. Gorgeous poem. Keep writing!
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