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I'm starting to think that Vince liked her all along...or something like that.

And maybe Jeremy likes her too or something? Well...at least Ben and Les are together!

Or maybe Sarah and Jeremy like eachother...garr, this is confusing.

So Blue boy is a student at her school? Interesting...keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

Hah, you're welcome for pointing out the oo's. Yeah, I liked the layout of this chapter a lot better, though it was much to short :P

geez! thanks for all these reviews. ::gasp:: Dee's going great so far. i just love the way she's so full of energy and life. waiting for more from you. :D

LOL, all four chapters were extremely amusing. (: hah, i had a great time reading your work & i'm glad you told me to. ;P hahaha. the main character seems to have no shame & her thoughts got me chuckling every now and then. good humour. ;) weirdly enough, i seem to fancy that dude she gave the note to hold onto for a while rather then the guy she hates with passion. why does she hate him anyway? he's the most popular, hot guy in the school. and the cliche over rules once again. (: though, i did catch errors here & there. -unmercilessly- stood out. ;P it's 'mercilessly'. lol, well, i look forward to your next chapters & what not. btw, thanks for reviewing my story. it's greatly appriciated. keep it up, yeah?

-xoxluurve

This is cute. Freaking tickle fights in bikinis never end well, though. Or, they end well, but not properly...Keep updating...looking forward to more details on each what if school is starting, homework won't start for a little bit longer right? Keep !

Heyy, I liked this chapter too :) So far the only complaints I have about this story is all the single lines...Personally, I like to read paragraphs when everything is sort of the same topic, and I don;t know why but the 'O's' bug me. I'm weird though so it's not bad or anything. I just like "ooh" better. I'm really enjoying the story so far though :)

O! Is it just me or does it seem like Vince was jealous that blue-boy was talking to her?

Or maybe...Vince liked her all along, and just decided to act on his feelings right now! Poor Dee...CRAPPY MEMORY, HAH! Anyways, keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

i like this so far!

Hey bella! I really liked this chapter! It was fun, entertaining, and oh-so-cute! I LOVED Dee and Vince's moment! Ah, I almost dies from all that love going on. So, so cute! I like the new character and I'm glad you put 'blue boy' in here. He was cool. I think his name should be either:Talon

Seth

Sherrick (Kinda like Derrick)

or Ryder

Those are ones I would choose! And that was so sweet, Im your fav. reviewer! You're mine too chica! Really you are! That darn ! Hopefully they didnt cut me off this time. Loves,((Heaven's Tears))

EHMIGAD!

It seems to me that Vince isn't sure if he likes her in that more-than-a-friend way. Haha, pushing people in the pool is wicked. I did that to my sister and she tried (TRIED) to kick my arse. xD

I like your story; it's not serious. Lol, I can't stand situations that don't have humour. So bite me! I like laughing. Anyone with a sense of humour rocks. Vince sounds cute. xD Keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

i like Dee. she's so full of life and her friends are great too. the only note i got for you is to watch out ofr some spelling mistakes. other than that your styke is great and makes one want to read on. please update soon. I'd love to know where this is going. :)

Finally a character that I can truly relate to. Thank you )

Love, Conni

Hehe. This story amuses me greatly. It's like...comic relief. I giggle helplessly at quite a few parts. I noticed a few typos here and there i think...But other than that, it's great. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I quite like this so far. It's cute and funny. I didn't notice many (or I can't remember if I saw any at all) spelling and grammar mistakes, so that's quite good as well. Off to chapter 2!

O my gosh! The thing cut me off again! gr! And now, I don't even remember what the heck I was gonna say! humph